I hate to say it peoples but we have reached the end to our political/social segment. I must return to my drawing board and create some new PiEcEs discussing more social issues and politics for the '08, and believe me the ideas have been conceived in my mind but i just haven't put them onto paper just yet. i know most writers can relate when you have this crazy topic but you just cannot gather the words or the most innovative stylistic approach for it to be a great piece, better than the previous piece you wrote. but anyways, stay tuned for when these complete perceptions of mine premier on (Makes Me Wanna Be A Writer) . come through next month when i showcase the old, the new, and most certainly more inner city truths-
last piece is simply a wake up call to all my "revolutionary" folk and the people who simply complain too damn much about EVERYTHING and it NEVER results in needed action. you can dicuss it and read about it as much as you want but if you are not executing it out on the streets, workplace, classroom, church, or wherever a revolution needs take place, then the studying and talking doesn't really measure up, am i right?
Check it out, let me know what you think... i'm out - PEacE
Track #5: On Demand
the revolution will not be televised
the struggle will paralyze our eyes
so what's the use in filmin'
the screenplay you wrote
tells the story of how
corruptness and demise lies in the hands, mouths, and minds of children
but we overlooked the many triflin men and women
how can the babies change
without proper intervention and instruction
instead genuinely noting their strengths over flaws is something we refuse to mention
oh this fault and vile music and television
but we simply change the station
rather than take the effort to fix the shoddy reception
so quick to blame ALL the downfall on Bush
but that's what you hide behind
wannabee revolutionaries and you you simple minded heedless beings
ya'll not performing o-s-c-a-r material
as empowering m-i-n-d-s's
and yet you say to me you filming gripping documentaries
sadly i thought these were pornos
but who knows
cuz lying around, moaning and groaning
and working my pointer finger
is something i can do myself
but slothiness and ignorance is bad for one's health
but here's the difference between me and you
I'm actually gonna bring upliftment back
having all people proudto sport a self determination backpack
see many of us are missing out on the most critical meal of the day
and I'm not talking breakfast my friends
I'm talking hearty bowls of kinship and compassion
with tall glasses of healthy insight
so please forgive me for not being at all polite
but ya'll know what i'm sayingis indeed valid and right
Wednesday, January 16, 2008
Last Piece (For Now)
Posted by Eye D. VS Mel O. at 2:08 AM
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good post ms. mellow mind
for further reference check this out
http://onthewritersblock.blogspot.com/2007/06/fk-revolution-part-deux.html
http://onthewritersblock.blogspot.com/2007/05/fck-revolution.html
*standing ovation*
I agree, it's time to stop hiding and ish.
Love this post.
I absolutely enjoyed this thought provoking piece.-Expressionz
I absolutely enjoyed this thought provoking piece.-Expressionz
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